Today was the best day until something unimaginable happened.
Both my dad and myself had always wanted to go on a rollercoaster so we decided it was time
to go to that was first on our list of rides. It was the morning so the ques weren't long so we
hopped on the rollercoaster. 3, 2, 1 blast off!! We were going very fast when, we came to a
complete halt. I knew this wasn’t meant to happen. Suddenly we start moving slowly then the
ride goes on as usual. Afterwards dad started laughing, he didn’t realise that I didn't know
that that was part of the ride. So he played along with and it worked
to go to that was first on our list of rides. It was the morning so the ques weren't long so we
hopped on the rollercoaster. 3, 2, 1 blast off!! We were going very fast when, we came to a
complete halt. I knew this wasn’t meant to happen. Suddenly we start moving slowly then the
ride goes on as usual. Afterwards dad started laughing, he didn’t realise that I didn't know
that that was part of the ride. So he played along with and it worked
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- Prompt: we were going very fast when
Ahh, dads' with a sense of humour are always fun to be around. You have used some specific verbs e.g. halt ... continue to develop your use of these. What is your next step for your writing? Are you editing and proof reading your writing?
ReplyDeleteI look forward to reading your next post.